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Could anyone critique my WIP logo, please? Any comments would be appreciated
Many thanks,
Gareth
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Posted 31 January 2010 - 06:52 PM
Looks good. I didn't view the thread at first as I wasn't a little sure what the thread was about heh. Thought it was about wildlife or something haha.
Good logo though, this a company of yours?
Good logo though, this a company of yours?
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Posted 01 February 2010 - 10:15 AM
Please don't take this the wrong way but when I first saw the logo, it wasn't a rhino. For whatever reason, looking at the image from right to left I saw some kind of shape and interpreted it as a jellyfish... certainly not a rhino's head.
Have you considered adding an eye or some other details (whilst keeping it flat)? Also maybe add some indication of whether the rhino is looking towards or away from the viewer.
P.S. Definitely go with the more detailed version, the simpler one doesn't look good at all.
Have you considered adding an eye or some other details (whilst keeping it flat)? Also maybe add some indication of whether the rhino is looking towards or away from the viewer.
P.S. Definitely go with the more detailed version, the simpler one doesn't look good at all.
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Posted 01 February 2010 - 05:03 PM
Assuming this is for the same company (or similar), I like the original: http://grab.by/27bb too
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Posted 03 February 2010 - 03:23 AM
Salathe, on 01 February 2010 - 10:15 AM, said:
Please don't take this the wrong way but when I first saw the logo, it wasn't a rhino. For whatever reason, looking at the image from right to left I saw some kind of shape and interpreted it as a jellyfish... certainly not a rhino's head.
Have you considered adding an eye or some other details (whilst keeping it flat)? Also maybe add some indication of whether the rhino is looking towards or away from the viewer.
P.S. Definitely go with the more detailed version, the simpler one doesn't look good at all.
Have you considered adding an eye or some other details (whilst keeping it flat)? Also maybe add some indication of whether the rhino is looking towards or away from the viewer.
P.S. Definitely go with the more detailed version, the simpler one doesn't look good at all.
Thanks Salathe, I appreciate your honesty. To be honest I was slightly unsure whether people would realise it's a rhino so to hear back that someone didn't realise it was a rhino is a sign that I need to work on it, which will make it ultimately a better logo.
Yes I had thought about an eye/other details, and I think an eye would help it, so I'll try that tomorrow.
Blambu, on 01 February 2010 - 05:03 PM, said:
Assuming this is for the same company (or similar), I like the original: http://grab.by/27bb too
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Posted 03 February 2010 - 10:10 PM
The front horn is to long.
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